Writing Consultant Sample 1
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Many people send in examples of whats bugging them. It helps if youre as specific as possible in your question. |
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<nobody@gopher.adp.wisc.edu> Dear Writing Consultant: Can you cite a rule and perhaps a reference concerning use of which or that? Examples: Take
the book that/which is on the table. Either choice seems OK to my ear, but I have heard allusions to a rule which I seem to have missed in high school. Thanks
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Well try to give examples.
Well also try to refer you to commonly used books that give another spin on the subject. After all, were not grammar gurus; we often have to look stuff up too! |
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<wcemail@facstaff.wisc.edu> Dear John, Thanks for your question; it was forwarded to us at the Online Writing Center. Heres the main rule on which and that: One uses which (preceded by a comma) in non-restrictive clauses: You should not ride motorcycles, which are dangerous. Here, all motorcycles are dangerousthe clause doesnt restrict the group of motorcycles considered dangerous. Use that in restrictive clauses: You should not ride motorcycles that are dangerous. Here, only those motorcycles that are dangerous should be avoidedthe clause restricts the group. The AP Style Book, commonly used in journalism, has a great explanation of this rule in the punctuation section. Good
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