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Frequently Asked Questions About Grammar and Style
When do I use that
instead of which?
Your choice of that or which
at the beginning of a clause depends upon whether the information
in the clause is essential to the sentence. The clause is "essential"
not because it contains information you think is important, but
if dropping it would fundamentally alter the meaning of the sentence.
That or which
no comma
Take for example, You should not ride motorcycles
that are dangerous.
In this sentence, what comes after the that
is essential, because it restricts which motorcycles (only
the dangerous ones) should be avoided. In this case, the "that"-clause
is a "restrictive modifier."
In cases where the modifying information is essential,
or restrictive, you may use either that or which,
though some people and some disciplines prefer "that"
with restrictive clauses. If you do use "which," make
sure not to use a comma before it; if you do, the sentence means
something quite different, as we'll see below!
Which only use a comma
In the case of non-restrictive modifiers,
the information however interesting or important it may
be is not grammatically essential. Use which
and separate the clause from the main sentence with commas:
You should not ride motorcycles, which are dangerous.
Here, the "which"-clause does not
restrict the group of motorcycles you should avoid according
to this sentence, all motorcycles are dangerous and should
not be ridden. This non-restrictive modifier is not essential
to the sentence; if you just said, "You should not ride motorcycles,"
you would convey the same meaning to your listener. What a difference
a comma can make!
Another example: "I bought my pick-up truck,
which is red, in 2001."
Here the clause "which is red" is inessential,
so it must begin with "which" and be surrounded with commas.
For more information, see our Writer's Handbook page
on Punctuating Restrictive and
Non-Restrictive Modifiers.
How do I use apostrophes?
Apostrophes () are used for two main
reasons: to signify possession or to join two separate words as
a contraction. Do not use an apostrophe to make a word plural.
1) Apostrophes to signify possession:
Singular Possessive: add an apostrophe + s to make a noun
possessive
Miss Parkers high heels
[the high heels belonging to Miss Parker]
the professors lecture [the lecture of the professor]
According to the Chicago Manual of Style,
when the singular noun taking the possessive form already ends
in an s, the same rule generally applies:
Brookss essay
Texass flag
Kirk Douglass films
However, this is not the case in journalism and
some other fields.
Plural Possessive: add an apostrophe alone (after the s
that is already there)
the Coen Brothers movies
[the movies of the Coen Brothers]
the rockets red glare
[the red glare of the rockets]
Possessive Pronouns: do not use apostrophes
your [belonging to you]
its [belonging to it]
their [belonging to them]
2) Apostrophes to form contractions:
In this case, part of a word is replaced by an apostrophe and joined
to the word which precedes it.
youre [you + are]
its [it + is]
theyre [they + are]
Be careful not to confuse contractions and possessive pronouns.
Its easy to confuse words that sound alike,
like "its" and "it's." Double-check your work
to make sure that you havent used a contraction where you
needed a possessive pronoun, or vice versa.
If you've gotten the hang of apostrophes, take our
self-test!
For examples of other common punctuation and style
errors, take a look at our Editing
Checklist.
Whats a dangling modifier? (And whats
a modifier, for that matter?)
A modifier is a phrase or word meant to describe
or explain part of a sentence. In Example 1a, the phrase before
the comma modifies the subject of the main sentence, which is "I":
Example 1a: Driving down the
interstate, I saw the
dead dog.
The modifer driving down the interstateclearly describes
the action of I.
A dangling or misplaced modifier is not clearly connected
to its object, making the sentence unclear or illogical:
Example 1b: I saw the dead
dog driving down the interstate.
In Example 1b, the modifier appears to describe the
dead dog, an unlikely candidate for a drivers license.
The problem with dangling modifiers is that they confuse your reader.
To get an idea of how embarrassing this kind of mistake can be,
take a look at our list of the best
dangling and misplaced modifiers of all time.
Dangling modifiers arent always that obvious, however, which
is why they are so common. Its especially easy to read right
over them when you already know or can easily guess what the modifier
refers to. Heres a trickier example:
Example 2: A sinister genius,
Agent Starling had to be on her guard against Hannibal
Lecter at all times.
In Example 2, the modifier is supposed to describe
"Hannibal Lecter," but instead it appears to modify "Agent
Starling," the subject of the sentence. If your reader has
seen The Silence of the Lambs, s/he could probably figure
out that a sinister genius refers to Lecter, not Starling.
If your reader hasnt seen the movie, though, s/he might think
that Starling is the sinister genius, since that's what the sentence
actually says. That would be quite confusing.
To avoid this error, place modifiers near the words they describe;
be sure the modified words actually appear in the sentence.
For examples of other common punctuation and style
errors, take a look at our Editing
Checklist.
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